Making It So

I realize that what I’ve posted is quite unpolished. An excess of dialogue is only the least of its sins, I’m sure, but that’s one I tend to notice early. After reading this excellent piece on Writer Beware, I wanted to note that I am under no illusions about the quality of this work. I took a dare, you will recall, that specified a finished novel rather than a publishable one. I can work on the latter, if I choose, once I finish the former. I now return you to your irregularly scheduled blogging…